Rachel Sobel ’15 Selected to Attend U.N. Climate Change Talks in Peru - Sobel is one of eight students sponsored by the American Chemical Society. She was also chosen to attend the 2013 Climate Change Talks in Poland.
Writing for Clarity
avoiding choppy sentences
A string of simple sentences is choppy and monotonous, and it fails to show the relationship between ideas. Consider combining short, related sentences into a more concise construction. Choppy: "Iguanas make nice pets. They take up little space." Better: "Because iguanas take up little space, they make nice pets."
SOURCE: Nesbitt-Johnston Writing Center