Kayla Cody ’15 and Kiana Sosa ’15 Awarded Bristol Fellowships - The two Boston Posse Foundation scholars will each receive a $30000 grant to live outside the U.S. for a year and study an area of great personal interest.
Writing for Clarity
Passive voice produces a sentence in which the subject receives an action. In contrast, active voice produces a sentence in which the subject performs an action. Passive voice often produces unclear, wordy sentences, whereas active voice produces generally clearer, more concise sentences. To change a sentence from passive to active voice, determine who or what performs the action, and use that person or thing as the subject of the sentence. Passive voice: "On April 19, 1775, arms were seized at Concord, precipitating the American Revolution." Active voice: "On April 19, 1775, British soldiers seized arms at Concord, precipitating the American Revolution."
SOURCE: Nesbitt-Johnston Writing Center